I am so moved and touched by your words. I love seeing your haiku as a collection. I love your reflections about writing haiku. There is freedom and voice in breaking the rules. I love the accidental haiku about Jesus. And you know I love the bike riding ones. Thank YOU. ❤️
Thank you for reading, Kortney! My mom just texted me and told me that the numbers had some repeats, so I tried to smooth it out. Now I am curious which of the number fours you liked. How did I not realize I had two?🤣
just wow. I am so glad I found your newsletter. i specifically loved this "breathe in its cinnamon steam" such good imagery 🌼
Thank you for reading and responding, Gala! I love hearing what stands out to you.
My favs are #2 - “green tongues unfurl in praise”
#5
#12
#13!!! Love this one!
Thank you for reading and responding so thoughtfully. I love hearing which ones speak to you💚💚💚
I am so moved and touched by your words. I love seeing your haiku as a collection. I love your reflections about writing haiku. There is freedom and voice in breaking the rules. I love the accidental haiku about Jesus. And you know I love the bike riding ones. Thank YOU. ❤️
Thank you for reading and sharing what stands out to you, Lorrie. Your Poetry Pie challenge sparked a lot of haiku love here on Substack. 💚
I thought that #4 was my favorite until I read #13!!
Thank you for reading, Kortney! My mom just texted me and told me that the numbers had some repeats, so I tried to smooth it out. Now I am curious which of the number fours you liked. How did I not realize I had two?🤣
Oh that is too funny. I do stuff like this all the time! Here are the lines that caught my eye:
4
bright and glowing fire,
ignite my heart to burn best
for you in secret
Thank you for sharing. I love hearing what stands out to you.