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David Kirkby's avatar

A lovely poem my friend.

I have never watched a cross country race - though I briefly enjoyed being in them, long ago. I gave that up for wilderness activities, in small groups or on my own. There is a similar striving, to reach a summit or descend a canyon.

Both can be a metaphor for life, and the search for meaning.

As with writing Poetry...

Best Wishes - Dave :)

Esther Jane's avatar

I love this, Abigail! You have captured wonderfully the witness of saints and the runner's desire to finish well. I love the subtle way you have woven scriptural allusions in to the poem. It makes me excited for the next season.

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